Although this was drawn from imagination, I figured it has something to do with this blog:) I had to do this today for a short film script, it's supposed to be the four main characters as they are sitting on the subway. Please give me some feedback on how I could make it look more obvious that this is the subway. Thank you

7 comments:

Kristian Antonelli said...

this is fantastic. You could add people either end , like book ends. But obviously they'd be out of frame slightly. they do look great tho.good luck

nadja said...

thanks, Kristian! i know what you mean, it would look much better with some people on either sides but I was told only the four main characters should be in the picture. I'll do something with the window maybe. thank you for your comment!

Gord MacDonald said...

Looks like commuters to me. What about props - book reading, newspapers, earphones?
Good work

Gord

nadja said...

Yes, you are right, they should be doing stuff. two of them have earphones but it is really hard to see, I should make it stronger. Plus I think the window is not right, I'll work on that too.

Skye said...

Don't forget the background. Subways have a rounded window, just add that behind the characters (rounded rectangle) and a few lines to indicate the sheen on glass. I think that would really help.

CarolineJarvis said...

great job with the subways

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