Although this was drawn from imagination, I figured it has something to do with this blog:) I had to do this today for a short film script, it's supposed to be the four main characters as they are sitting on the subway. Please give me some feedback on how I could make it look more obvious that this is the subway. Thank you
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this is fantastic. You could add people either end , like book ends. But obviously they'd be out of frame slightly. they do look great tho.good luck
thanks, Kristian! i know what you mean, it would look much better with some people on either sides but I was told only the four main characters should be in the picture. I'll do something with the window maybe. thank you for your comment!
Yes, you are right, they should be doing stuff. two of them have earphones but it is really hard to see, I should make it stronger. Plus I think the window is not right, I'll work on that too.
Don't forget the background. Subways have a rounded window, just add that behind the characters (rounded rectangle) and a few lines to indicate the sheen on glass. I think that would really help.
great job with the subways
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